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Fra :  Kevin_90 | Vist : 1529 gange
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Dato : 03-03-08 22:07 |
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plz hjælp med at rettte denne tekst, ved godt der lidt for doven, men har sindssyg stor aflevering for til imorgen. Det er fra dansk til engelsk
Danske version:
Harold var godt sur. Hans cykeltur var gået helt i vasken! Han havde virkelig glædet sig til at prove sine nye, rode cykel, og turen fra Birmingham til landsbyen Knowle, ti kilometer uden for Birmingham centrum, var gået vældigt fin. Men cyklens forhjul lavede en mærkelig lyd. Han holdt fem minutter pause og var på vej hjem igen. Han kørte hurtigt rundt i bakkens skarpe sving, og id et same faldt forhjulets møtrik af. Der lå han med næsen i asfaltens hårde, sorte overflade. Eller rettere, asfaltens farve var nu den samme som cyklens: blodrød! Han humped ind til lægeklinikken, som lå ved bakkens fod, men klinikdamen sendte ham hjem i en taxa, da kæges konsultationstid var forbi den dag. I taxaen havde han fået skæld ud af chaufføren, fordi hans næse druppede blod på taxaens sæde, og fordi han havde ikke penge nok. “Jeg er ikke de fattiges hjælp,”havde manden sagt. “Jeg må tænke på konens nye frakke, ungernes vinterstøvler, hundens loppehalsbånd og det, jeg selv skylder på pubben”. Nu lå Harold hjemme i stuens sikkerhed, men han vidste, han ville være nød til at hugge sin brors cykel for at køre til tandlægen. Højre forstandsene halvdel matte ligge ved foden
Min engelske version:
Harold was really mad. His bike trip was gone all wrong! He had really looked forward to try his new red bike and the trip from Birmingham to a village Knowle, ten kilometres out of Birmingham Centrum, was gone quit good. But the bike’s front wheel did make a strange sound. He took a five minutes break / pause and was on the way home again. He drove quickly around in the Hills and in the same the nut fald of.
There he lay down with the nose on the asphalt heavy black surface. Or truly, surfaces colour was now the same as the bike: Blood red! He limped into a clinic, which lay at the hills food, but the secretary sends him home in a cap, ((da)) lægens surgery hours was passed that day. In the caphad been told off of the cap driver, because his nose dryppede blood on the taxis seed, and because he had not enough money. ”I am not de fattiges hjælper” had the man said. “I must think about my wifes new coat, the childrens vinterstøvler, the dogs flee collar and that what I own to the pub”. Now was Harold laying home in the stuens sikkerhed, men han vidste, han ville være nød til at hugge sin brors cykel for at køre til tandlægen. Højre forstandsene halvdel matte ligge ved foden
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:27 |
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Harold was really mad. His bike trip was gone all wrong! He had really looked forward to try his new red bike and the trip from Birmingham to a village Knowle, ten kilometres out of Birmingham Centrum, was gone quit good. But the bike’s front wheel did make a strange sound. He took a five minutes break and was on the way home again. He drove quickly around in the Hills and in the same the nut fald of.
There he lay down with the nose on the asphalt heavy black surface. Or truly, surfaces colour was now the same as the bike: Blood red! He limped into a clinic, which lay at the hills food, but the secretary sends him home in a cap, while the doctor surgery hours was passed that day. In the caphad been told off of the cap driver, because his nose dripped blood on the taxiseats, and because he was broke. ”I am not the poor peoples helper” the driver had told him. “I must think about my wifes new coat, the childrens winterboots, the dogs flee collar and what I owe to the pub”. Now Harold was laying home in the safty of the sitting room , but he knew, that he had to steal his brothers bike, to go back to the dentist.
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Højre forstandsene halvdel matte ligge ved foden = det forstår jeg ikke???????
det med fed forstår jeg heller ikke |
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:28 |
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Jeg ved ikke om det kan bruges, men det er meget sjovt at lege med
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Fra : karenD  |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:35 |
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In the caphad been told off of the cap driver, |
In the cab he had been told off by the cab driver.
Bemærk cab med b
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:41 |
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He had really looked forward to try |
Der er noget galt i grammatikken her... Er det ikke før datid, iså fald foreslår jeg:
He really had been looking forward to trying
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:49 |
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Her er mit spæde forsøg. Kig det lige igennem Karen. der er noget med fed... det vedf jeg ikke hvad er hedder
Harold was really mad. His bike trip was gone all wrong! He had really looked forward to try his new red bike and the trip from Birmingham to a village Knowle, ten kilometres out of Birmingham Centrum, was gone quit good. But the bike’s front wheel did make a strange sound. He took a five minutes break and was on the way home again. He drove quickly around in the Hills and in the same the nut felt of.
There he lay down with the nose on the asphalt heavy black surface. Or truly, surfaces colour was now the same as the bike: Bloody red! He limped into a clinic, which lay at the hills food, but the secretary sent him home in a cab while the doctors surgery hours was passed that day. In the cab he had been told off of the driver, because his nose dripped blood on the seat, and because he was broke. ”I am not the poor people’s helper” the driver said. “I must think about my wife’s new coat, the children’s winter boots, the dogs flee collar and that what I owe to the pub”. Now Harold was laying home in the safe of the sitting room, but he knew that he had to steel his brother’s bike to go to the dentist. Right forstandsene half had to be on the foden of the hills
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:50 |
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to THE village
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out of Birmingham Centrum |
CENTRE
HAD gone QUITE WELL
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:51 |
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:54 |
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Harold was really mad. His bike trip was gone all wrong! He had really looked forward to try his new red bike and the trip from Birmingham to the village Knowle, ten kilometres out of Birmingham centre, had gone quite well. But the bike’s front wheel did make a strange sound. He took a five minutes break and was on the way home again. He drove quickly around in the Hills and in the same the nut felt of.
There he lay down with the nose on the asphalt heavy black surface. Or truly, surfaces colour was now the same as the bike: Bloody red! He limped into a clinic, which lay at the hills food, but the secretary sent him home in a cab while the doctors surgery hours was passed that day. In the cab he had been told off of the driver, because his nose dripped blood on the seat, and because he was broke. ”I am not the poor people’s helper” the driver said. “I must think about my wife’s new coat, the children’s winter boots, the dogs flee collar and that what I owe to the pub”. Now Harold was laying home in the safe of the sitting room, but he knew that he had to steel his brother’s bike to go to the dentist. Right forstandsene half had to be on the foden of the hills
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:55 |
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Hwa er det sidste for noget bavl LOOl Fatter det ikke
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 22:56 |
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det hedder osse to steal...stjæle
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:01 |
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Kom nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Karen Er der mere?? Hvad betyder dette nonsens? Kode
Højre forstandsene halvdel matte ligge ved foden |
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:01 |
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Høh, Klumme, jeg ved sørme heller ikke lige, hvad det med fed skal betyde... 
Undskyld mine store bogstaver...
MADE
FELL OFF
SAFETY
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:03 |
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Halli halli hallå, hvad sker der dog i Vrå? Er der nogen hjemme???
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:06 |
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"Højre fortands ene halvdel måtte ligge ved foden" ??????
Eller hvad???
Jeg fatter nada, men jeg er selvfølgelig heller ikke fra Vrå
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:09 |
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Bakkens fod hedder altså ikke the hills foot (bemærk ikke food)
Men hvad hedder det så?
Gyldendal hjælper ikke her...
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:11 |
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Vrå LOOl det var det eneste jeg kunne hitte på som rimede hehehe.
Tror den er der nu, bortset fra det med ved foden af bakken... ved ikke hvad det hedder
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Harold was really mad. His bike trip was gone all wrong! He had really looked forward to try his new red bike and the trip from Birmingham to the village Knowle, ten kilometres out of Birmingham centre, had gone quite well. But the bike’s front wheel made a strange sound. He took a five minutes break and was on the way home again. He drove quickly around in the Hills and in the same the nut fell of.
There he lay down with the nose on the asphalt heavy black surface. Or truly, surfaces colour was now the same as the bike: Bloody red! He limped into a clinic, which lay at the hills food, but the secretary sent him home in a cab while the doctors surgery hours was passed that day. In the cab he had been told off of the driver, because his nose dripped blood on the seat, and because he was broke. ”I am not the poor people’s helper” the driver said. “I must think about my wife’s new coat, the children’s winter boots, the dogs flee collar and that what I owe to the pub”. Now Harold was laying home in the safty of the sitting room, but he knew that he had to steel his brother’s bike to go to the dentist. Right half front tooth had to be by the fodenof the hills
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:11 |
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det mener jeg heller ikke. Prøver lige GADs som jeg har på PC'er... moment
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:16 |
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Men hvis Kevin kan æde den, så kan vi jo osse LOOL
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Harold was really mad. His bike trip was gone all wrong! He had really looked forward to try his new red bike and the trip from Birmingham to the village Knowle, ten kilometres out of Birmingham centre, had gone quite well. But the bike’s front wheel made a strange sound. He took a five minutes break and was on the way home again. He drove quickly around in the Hills and in the same the nut fell of.
There he lay down with the nose on the asphalt heavy black surface. Or truly, surfaces colour was now the same as the bike: Bloody red! He limped into a clinic, which lay at the hills food, but the secretary sent him home in a cab while the doctors surgery hours was passed that day. In the cab he had been told off of the driver, because his nose dripped blood on the seat, and because he was broke. ”I am not the poor people’s helper” the driver said. “I have to think about my wife’s new coat, the children’s winter boots, the dogs flee collar and that what I owe to the pub”. Now Harold was laying home in the safty of the sitting room, but he knew that he had to steel his brother’s bike to go to the dentist. Right half front tooth had to be by the foot of the hills. |
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:21 |
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Kevin?
Ham har vi ikke set meget til, han er vist gået i Føtex...
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:22 |
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Jamen det er rigtig, og stod man med en engelænder skulle de såmænd nok forstå det
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:24 |
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Jeg er i hvert tilfælde ret stolt.....af dig LOOL Tak for hjælpen
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:25 |
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Nå jeg skal lige se om jeg skal ud og være ond hæ hæ hæ  Hvad syns du???
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:26 |
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Han sover. Han regner med at vi skriver den ind med blæk for ham til i morgen |
Tja, det her lektiehjælp er udelukkende for min egen fornøjelses skyld - han burde jo selv lave det.
Men det plejer at være tysk oversættelser de spørger på, og dér står jeg af.
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Fra : Kevin_90 |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:31 |
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hehe hvordan giver man point..
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Fra : Kevin_90 |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:32 |
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Fra : karenD |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:34 |
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Sådan!
High five til Klumme
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Fra : Kevin_90 |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:36 |
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hehe takker for svarene skal nok give ektra point en anden gang ;)
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Fra : Klumme |
Dato : 03-03-08 23:40 |
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Det går nok Kevin Bare vær flittig, og pas skolen. Det er vigtigt
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Fra : frieda  |
Dato : 05-03-08 18:45 |
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His bike trip was gone all wrong!
Alreday the second sentence is wrong.
Correct: His bike trip had gone all wrong
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